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[olympus]

This is my first alt and its not very good just give me some tips adn plz rate it
http://img171.exs.cx/img171/9417/deadly6gm.jpg

[olympus]

This is my second alt bit better than the first but i want your opinions and ratingings on it plz http://img212.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img212&image=alt1qr.png

[ProSpider]

Um... The first one isn't an alt. You took a screenie and scribbled all over it on Paint. -2/10

Second is okay, just work on your form and try to make it perfect.
5/10

[Ruth]

I agree with ProSpider on the first one. 1/10
The second one, hm.. It's quite good although, it's sorta the same as what's been made for HC Members so there's not really any imagination in it. 4/10