(Nosx) School Girlish?

[Nosx]

nothing too special about this one. supposed to look like a school girl.

the hair is supposed to look like its cascading over her shoulder.
http://i44.tinypic.com/2yzmrt2.png
^^ before & after.
rate?

[Shadowchild]

it's nice but the top could be a few shades lighter, it will just be easier to see the hair & the tie.

6/10

[Story]

simple, but nice =)
agreed with SC.

[a1b2c3d4e5]

I agree with SC.
Perhaps you could add a fringe on her hair so that it covers part of the shirt.
8/10

[Mabel]

Not bad, something looks pretty wrong with the hair though.